My Reflection on my Story

My story was a simple story about my family and our daily day activities. It about how me and my brother asked my parents to play at the basketball court. I challenged my brother to a basketball match, if I lose, I clean his room, and if he loses, he does the dishes. Then we went to the pool where we say our sister that didn't want us to go to the pool because we stinks. W then decided to go to our rooms. I did well on the dialogue, each one of them took turns, they didn't talk at the same time. There was a lot of says in the story. I need to work on making the sprite move, or glide. I need some movements in the story. One thing I will do different is remove some of the dialogue, because there was a lot of them.